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Post by lcforlife on Sept 8, 2006 20:16:14 GMT -5
For all who dont know me(which is everyone besides lastconservativefan, she knows me a little), I write my own lyrics and poems. Just thought I would share a poem with you, and feel free to tell me what you do or dont like! BROKENNESS I guess its OK As my mind comes into play And my heart begins to decay. I just can't stay. I wish I may, I wish I might Can't you see you're the only one in my sight? You are my light in the darkest night You keep me bright. Can you see that I need you, Or are you going to leave me here to plead to you? I'm burning from the flames in your eyes. I know it's all up to the Father, So why do I bother? I can't stop thinking about you, It makes me so blue. When I close my eyes I see you, I want you to see me too.
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Post by lconservativefan on Sept 9, 2006 7:43:52 GMT -5
good good good i write too and i hope to turn out to be one of the best like mr zindle but i just started a week or so ago and i have wrote 3 working on four !!!!!!!! i really like this one i think i read it in your blog .
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Post by lcforlife on Sept 9, 2006 9:18:51 GMT -5
yea, its in my Blog, and I have been writing sence I was 11...im 15 now....
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